Thanks! (: With this topic I know everyone was expecting a "sucker punch" twist so I tried several ways to throw them off the trail, like maybe the sucker punch is just the rhino getting shot, or the bloodsucking mosquito getting punched up.. ;) I wanted to make a Moby Dick white whale allusion but I think I left it too vague even though its described as white and whale like in the safe sentence, I think I need to literally say white whale. ;D