I enjoyed this even more on the second read through and didn't even notice the excessive 'features'. Every time I saw a place where you could trim words, I ended up thinking that the extra words were precisely what made your piece interesting. However, if they're going to be sticklers, I could probably eyeball a few things to snip.
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Date: 2019-04-03 11:59 pm (UTC)