ext_135786 ([identity profile] pondhopper.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] aggienaut 2021-10-11 08:55 pm (UTC)

Yes, I think it would be a good transitional inclusion to the first chapter if you can incorporate it smoothly after you find out about no Peace Corps. All of a sudden you were heading elsewhere with no explanation of how you arrived at that point! And I was curious.
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