Emo Snail, I

[aggienaut]

My trail I leave a trail of tears,
A single tear a time of course,
My shell an emotional shell a wall,
Onward moving, slowly progressing,
A snail of Angst,
I emo snail.

Comments

I Emo Snail

[emosnail.livejournal.com]

"My shell an emotional shell a wall" obviously has too many syllables. Now taking recommendations for to fix it. I actually really like the poem except for that line.

[mister-spooky.livejournal.com]

Don't deny the hella, foo.

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