You have a decent style, but too often you write about stuff that you haven't a clue about, and haven't a clue that you haven't a clue: you haven't even met a clue and wouldn't know what to do with one if you did happen to run upon it. Not here, though. Not even a little bit.
You have some real talent. This is rare. Let's see what you do with it.
Write What You Know
You have a decent style, but too often you write about stuff that you haven't a clue about, and haven't a clue that you haven't a clue: you haven't even met a clue and wouldn't know what to do with one if you did happen to run upon it. Not here, though. Not even a little bit.
You have some real talent. This is rare. Let's see what you do with it.
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