Iteration 4
Mar. 30th, 2008 12:16 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
aggienautWillamette Statement Version 0.4 (With changes from this revision iteration marked). I tried to address everything people recommended, felt like I couldnt' come up with a satisfactory way to address a lot of suggestions, but looking at it I guess I did tweak a lot of things. Anyway feedback continues to be appreciated. Thanks again.
