As to the story, I was afraid to reread it until just now. Oops her name changes between Sharon and Sarah from one paragraph to the next! And there's that zero hanging in there that probably went with the submitted version. I wonder how forgiving of stupid mistakes like that they'll be :-[]
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Date: 2018-08-21 10:50 pm (UTC)As to the story, I was afraid to reread it until just now. Oops her name changes between Sharon and Sarah from one paragraph to the next! And there's that zero hanging in there that probably went with the submitted version. I wonder how forgiving of stupid mistakes like that they'll be :-[]