Thanks for the feedback! I'm still working on the final paragraph and I think I might be able to improve the transitional paragraph as well. I've tried making complete multiple versions of the conclusion and I'm still not happy with any of them, so my homework for tonight is to write it in VERSE in at least two different forms just to get my head thinking more about the flow of hte words. (:
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Date: 2019-03-20 09:33 am (UTC)