Nice piece! Would enjoy reading it in the paper, esp with a picture of the two of you.
Two thoughts: I think " inclusive tropical drinks" should be "included tropical drinks," but probably, more properly, "open bar tropical drinks." And I think you should offer a translation of Tres Ojos and describe what they are before you take the reader down inside.
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Date: 2019-04-01 03:11 pm (UTC)Two thoughts: I think " inclusive tropical drinks" should be "included tropical drinks," but probably, more properly, "open bar tropical drinks." And I think you should offer a translation of Tres Ojos and describe what they are before you take the reader down inside.