In Space! - I

[aggienaut]

Introducing... the first of a little comic thing I doodled while bored in Legal Writing class a year ago.


TO BE CONTINUED

The first frame is pretty much as a doodled it, just "inked" on the computer, second frame a little more computerized, and third totally computerized (over an original pencilling that looks more or less the same). Which do you think works best?

Comments

[mortimer-ford.livejournal.com]

The doodle slyle works for me.

[ashmedai.livejournal.com]

Haha! I like it. Each frame has its appeal, but I think I like the first one best. :)

[emo-snal.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Yeah even though space shouldn't really be off-white (with visible writing from the other side of the piece of paper!), I think I like it too.